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Originally Posted by Il_Ritrattista
Don't worry! For me, counts especially what you wrote on the comments! Anyway, for the notation of the drums, I used the standard notation for the drum parts (I downloaded a small manual with all the percussions notation, for drums and orchestral percussions)  . Anyway thank you all very much for the comments. It's a great thing that every competition you put even a commentary for each work. I think it helps a lot the arrangers/composers/performers to improve them. See ya soon for the next competition then xD.
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Usually the bass drum is written on the first space (F) or the D below the staff. If I'm reading correctly, you also want the snare and high tom playing at the same time in the beginning. Is measure 2 a roll on the hi-hat or a suspended cymbal? At measure 3, what instruments are signified by the D on the line and the F on the line? What does the B above the staff signify at measure 13? Also, the X on the space (c), do you what a rimshot or cross stick?
When you listen to the recording I can clearly understand your notation, but from a performers standpoint it is very unclear. I understand that notation is one of the most confusing parts of percussion, but as a percussionist it is also confusing when you aren't sure what the composer/arranger was trying to notate. The general rule with percussion notation is this:
As long as you give a notation key or put text next to the note each time it is introduced, there is no real wrong way. Normally the bass drum is on the first space (F), but after that everything else is up to the composer. Even if it is considered standard, it would still help to write it out in text because I have come across very different ways of notating drumset. Sometimes even whats considered standard drum notation by some composers is contradicted by other composers. The general rule is that it should be clear from a performers standpoint exactly what the composer wants. Everything else really isn't important. You did good with the standard notation though.